Very important person (VIP)!!!

It was a  beautiful instance;
which  happened 1 yr ago on our floor,
when my family got a glance
of our new neighbours who came to live next door.

As the neighbours came & go ,
so nothing special is going on her.
Everybody in my family are so busy,
that nobody bother about anyone & don’t even care.

I am also the part of my family,
so how I can be apart from them.
As they all are busy in their own jobs,
thats why I am indulging in the same.

The time was pasting like a decade,
when we all were busy in our own boring jobs.
If anyone came & ask us reason why?
we can’t be able to use our brain’s top.

As this boring time was going on,
the ‘last day of year’ came at last.
we all were invited including other neighbours,
to celebrate new yr & have a blast.

In my family my mom & me
decided to be a party’s part.
besides owesome arrangement,food & music,
presence of something new was there apart.

As my mother was bust with other aunties
so I have also choosen my colony’s mate.
but still having nice company of her,
I was attracted by someone with immense pace.

I got first look of my new neighbours
among them their daughter was foccused by me atmost,
besides having attractive looks & smile,
something which I don’t know was attaching me a lot.

I decided to just go & ask her name,
to stop the curiosity born inside me, meanwhile,
but when I went & asked her name,
she just don’t replied & gave smile.

suddenly My mate just snatched me toward herself,
& said “don’t talk to her.she is mad & can’t properly speak”.
After listening to such words
my whole soul was just shaken n got freezed.

Next morning I woke up
with the same sun rising from east,
I listen to sweet voice of songs ,
coming from next door who sooths my ears at peak.

As i decided to know about
the new born singers’s pearl.
after doing some inspection I got to know
 that she was none other but the same girl.

After that when everyday I compared my activities with her,
I truly found myself helpless.
cause job completed by her with perfection & timeliness,
always makes me feel speechless.

During that day I realised one thing,
that she is not mad but me.
the delighted response of bye for me
make me feel that I m mentally retarded
& getting a good response of VIP.
PS:Give only love but not sympathy to these VIPs.
PS:I don’t know whether i reached to all ur expections
PS:I know its boring but this one is truly close to my heart.
PS:Parth’s unique bro is the main motivation key of this post.See the post from here

PS:sorry for late updation.
PS:song of the day:- “Hai gujarish- GHAJINI”
PS:no more PS buh bye ;)

10 Responses to “Very important person (VIP)!!!”

  1. hey first of all u’ve truly tried to reached our expectations…..the post may be boring for a few readers but it has emotions only deep thinkers can comprehend so I’ll like to appreciate your behavior of not showing sympathy but giving love to VIPies……….. well I read ur comment quite a long time back and I knew u’ll be writing abt it someday and the day has come…………..keep writing and next time don’t keep us waiting…………

  2. Too Too good…no doubt.
    Felt really nice after reading it.

  3. first of all…..u have written it better than expected(i knew u would write something on it but didnt think u would write a poem)……
    and yeah thanx for considering my post to be inspiring :P :P
    good going ….
    rock on!!!

  4. @ Ashish gourav
    yeah u r right actually i thought to write about it ,a long time ago.But due to some work i can’t be able to write something on it.& finally yesterday i got the time n i did it.n yes love is must for each n every VIP…. :)
    thanx keep reading … :D

    @Intutius (Himanshu)

    Thanx… feeling gr8 that u liked it :)

    @Unbreakable

    lolzz… even i was searching the way to express my feeling about it for long time but suddenly ,just 2 days ago ,the thought of writing poem clicked into mah mind.N luckily i got words n i did it.
    thanx thanx alot to u for such a good & inspiring post. :P
    rock on!!!…….

  5. hey hi,
    you wrote it really well…nice work..
    keep writting!! :)

  6. hi dear :D
    thanx…..for appreciating.
    keep reading :P

  7. nice… more imp, I totally agree that if u watch VIP’s… we will question ourself n our lives….

    Keep Rocking n Posting !!

  8. yeah rightly said.
    thanx keep reading!!!

  9. Well.. a fine approach…. Amazed to see a poem in such a manner….!! Good going… Using a poem to do the talking increases the expression attached to the subject… that is very justified here….

    Cheers…!
    JD

  10. thanks for appreciating
    welcome in my blog!!!
    keep reading….

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